Friday, September 19, 2008

Third power and grammar

Wednesday and Thursday we have corrected your third power paragraphs to remove fragments, run-ons, comma splices and any other sentence structure errors. Most importantly, we worked to remove all "be" verbs from your writing!!!! Remember, no more passive voice in your writing! Over the weekend, type all ten power paragraphs, in their new forms, so that you can just "plug in" the grammar elements as we study them next week.

On Friday, my block classes completed worksheets for appositives and prepositional phrases. You can find the instructional material in the grammar book pgs. L91-98. Pick up the worksheets when you return to class.